Assignment for December 9

1.  Read the following two essays:
           Sample Essay #1 (submitted to Princeton)  http://www.quintcareers.com/collegegate4.html
           Sample Essay #2 (submitted to Cornell)  http://www.quintcareers.com/collegegate5.html

2. Write a critique of the 2 essays in which you compare the essays in term of the following.  (Write a brief paragraph on each):

• contains rich use of detail
• shows voice and personality
• portrays values likely to be important to the college

3. Submit your completed critique to the basket in front of the classroom.

4.  Use the remaining time to draft, revise, or polish your own college admissions essay.