A Google Drive folder of handouts and information sheets for the biography project is at:
https://drive.google.com/a/rsu20.org/folderview?id=0B9bbnt4AFVJtOU05V1FLLWlheDA&usp=sharing
You read these documents online, print them out, or make copies that you save within your own Google Drive folders.
Wednesday, April 09, 2014
Monday, April 07, 2014
Extending, Revising, & Polishing Genre Pieces
I've spent time reading over your draft genre pieces. Here are some general suggestions that will help strengthen your pieces:
1. Develop your headings and titles. A fully developed heading may be 2 - 3 sentences or more. A title is generally short -- but make the most of it. "Waris Dirie" or "Waris Dirie -- One Determined Woman" The 2nd title is stronger, yet it still doesn't "cost" that much. Agree?
2. Among your 5 pieces, include at least 3 pieces about specific events or moments in your biography. General pieces that give an overview of a person and that person's accomplishments can be useful, but don't stop there.
3. Aim for at least one piece from the point of view of a "contemporary" of your subject -- someone who knew your subject and had a relationship of some kind with him or her. That person undoubtedly had an opinion on your subject and a way of voicing that opinion.
1. Develop your headings and titles. A fully developed heading may be 2 - 3 sentences or more. A title is generally short -- but make the most of it. "Waris Dirie" or "Waris Dirie -- One Determined Woman" The 2nd title is stronger, yet it still doesn't "cost" that much. Agree?
2. Among your 5 pieces, include at least 3 pieces about specific events or moments in your biography. General pieces that give an overview of a person and that person's accomplishments can be useful, but don't stop there.
3. Aim for at least one piece from the point of view of a "contemporary" of your subject -- someone who knew your subject and had a relationship of some kind with him or her. That person undoubtedly had an opinion on your subject and a way of voicing that opinion.
Write a 5-minute Poem to Kick Start Your Week
Use this site to create your own list poem based on your biography:
Notes:
- A list poem may appear random but it is not
- The poem should end with something surprising, insightful, or important. One way to do this is to move from the literal to the figurative (see example poem below).
- Once you have made your initial list, consider re-arranging the order of the items. Also consider adding more detail. Use precise and concrete language as much as possible. Provide your reader with a clear image of what you see.
Sample below:
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What’s in the canoe
a sharpened axe with a battered wooden handle
a weathered tent green with mold
a bag of pea flour
a plug of tobacco
three long poles with metal boots
four damp wool blankets
a refusal to turn back
a lot of heart
--based on the book Great Heart: History of a Labrador Adventure
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